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Living parts of it was worse than writing it Can you recommend your own book on Goodreads Working with my brother on it though was very cathartic and brought a lot of healing to us both as we got to know each again. A very fascinating story I enjoyed reading the different perspectives and how family members were affected.
- 296 pages
- My Brothers Eyes
- John Stephen Ayliffe
- 19 November 2017 John Stephen Ayliffe